Kia Ora Charlotte, I like the volcanoes you made, and how you planned before you made it explode. It looks like a amazing and fun activity! The volcano looks amazing.
Tolofa lava Charlotte, I really like how creative you were about the volcano. Maybe next time you could Describe the volcano a bit more and talk about what you learnt and what you would do next. Bye Charlotte If you have time maybe you can come and give me feedback on my blog if you do you will be the first one to comment because I just started my blog:http://wpsayvas.blogspot.co.nz/.
I really enjoyed this post and how you put everything on a slide. What was the hardest thing for you while making the volcano? Next time maybe add more pictures. Otherwise this was a really good post
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Kia Ora Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteI like the volcanoes you made, and how you planned before you made it explode. It looks like a amazing and fun activity! The volcano looks amazing.
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Tolofa lava Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteI really like how creative you were about the volcano. Maybe next time you could Describe the volcano a bit more and talk about what you learnt and what you would do next. Bye Charlotte If you have time maybe you can come and give me feedback on my blog if you do you will be the first one to comment because I just started my blog:http://wpsayvas.blogspot.co.nz/.
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this post and how you put everything on a slide.
What was the hardest thing for you while making the volcano? Next time maybe add more pictures. Otherwise this was a really good post